One More Time

One More Time

A Poem by Susanna F

A sickening and vicious kick to my stomach

Is how the news feels

The most important man in my life

Who has loved my since before I was born

Will never hug me again

Will never smile or laugh or tweak my nose

I didn't know the cheerful goodbye

Last weekend was going to be our last

I'm not ready for this

I need to see you

Just one more time.

© 2011 Susanna F


Author's Note

Susanna F
For my Grandpa, Jack.

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Your poem/eulogy is terribly sad
thought provoking and sad.
Your poem is like a painting of the
man and your connection.
Excellent writing.
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


:(

May he be well

:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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JRB
NICE WRITE,, KEEP UP THE WORK,,,,,,,,

Posted 12 Years Ago


heartwrenching

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 29, 2011
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Susanna F
Susanna F

Private, AZ



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My name is Susanna. I love writing, and have written stories since I could spell. I write mostly fiction and poems, and have had several poems published. As a full-time working wife and mom, I hav.. more..

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