Dreamy Girl

When its' harder to speak,
let the silence remain,
let the suspense grow.

You be besides me,
I will close my eyes
and feel your presence.
You conclude I am asleep,
and I will pour my heart's content
as if talking in sleep.

Reviews

[Aurora Lynn]

Good poem! I liked the way you wrote this one, who everything flowed really smoothly. Just one little mistake though. "its'" should be 'it's'. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. My favorite part is "When its' harder to speak,let the silence remain,let the suspense grow." Well done.

~Aurora

[Sukriti Suki]

I like the thought expressed here..though it feels incomplete.

[Jimmy Toots]

I like this :) short but sweet

[Queen of Fantasy]

Very Powerful! Good Write!

[Ruth]

What the other thinks is not always the case, but you have infused this with such meaning! Let them wander through labyrinths of your heart and mind.......you can always talk to them without them even knowing! lol Beautiful piece xx