infinite love

infinite love

A Poem by swarupa
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this poem is about the feeling of love,which a unexpressed feeling..and this feelings cant be by selfishness .and it is the silent sweat pain of heart

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infinite love


                             you are the only one in my heart,
                                                                            whose thought is my  life 
                              that precious feeling,i never want to lose.

                             when I started to think about you, from that day 
                                                                            whole sad get disappear ,

                             when I cry for you,my soul feels desperate 
                                                             mind misses you.....

                             may the world change by the cruelty
                                                            but you are in my deep thought,

                            you are only mine that is the golden word
                                                                              it  cannot change ever.

                           i am speechless in your thought,
                                                               and can't express the love 

                          my world is only you and i am happy with 
                                                                           your  imperfect world.

                          my evergreen word is that i still love you
                                                                   it is a constant not a variable
                           it may be infinitive but not a zero.... 

                           till the last day of my life  my love is infinitive  only 4 u
                                                               
                                                                    
                                                                             







                            

© 2014 swarupa


Author's Note

swarupa
poetry is the feeling of our inner world..i think you all will like the best feeling of love.its a unique feeling ,when it come for only 4 a beloved person.whom we never want 2 loss.. feel free to comment if you like it ..

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That's pretty impressive write. I adore this poem which's well penned with your feelings of someone with whom u r in love of. I know if u stay in touch of this great site u'll improve yer skills. I've got some grammatical errors i'd have love to correct 'em all but due to time shortage, I can't correct 'em all. If you re read yer this write..I hope you can correct it yerself or u can use google checker.

I love the concept. In today's life or in modern time am being reading such kinda stuffs which are on love. May be the love is getting vanish from this world but u lovers writing or such sorta great love pieces remind the world that the love is still in the world. .we only gotta change our perceptions to see...to feel the drops of love.

Keep writing!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


swarupa

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your encouragement Stephen. English is my second language so i am facing trouble to.. read more
Stephen

10 Years Ago

My pleasure, pretty. I'd love to encourage you as long as am over this site. I'd love to read your t.. read more
swarupa

10 Years Ago

tthank you Stephen for your sweat review for my poems.i am very happy with your encourage. yes dear... read more
i will try to improve in future


Posted 10 Years Ago


Excellent!!
am glad that you have posted your first poem. It is good . do not worry about any grammar or writing mistakes .


Posted 10 Years Ago


swarupa

10 Years Ago

thanks for being there always with me

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