life

life

A Poem by swarupa

It may take you up 
It may drag you down 
some times it scares you 
sometimes you feel proud of you
sometime it makes you feel worthless 
sometime it gives you all the happiness 
thats what we call life 
still we wonder what it is.
life never stops you to do anything 
you are your own king 
you can fly as long as you want 
you can fly as high as you wish 
life have nothing to do with it 
make your wish and go for it 
have faith on yourself and keeping working on it.

© 2014 swarupa


Author's Note

swarupa
we make our own destiny...

its still at rough stage and am working on it.....

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Beautiful poem .. you know what? A story write on which i`m working is yeah .. seemed a bit similar in theme with your this sexy poem. In the closing minutes, i`m going to post here my new story-write and hey .. i`m so happy to read this poem because it refreshes my mind.

Hey .. I loved this poem so, check out this version of your poem now :-

It may take you up
It may push you down
Sometimes... you feeling to give up
All of time, you live with a fake crown

Many times, it makes you much worthless
Most of the times, you find you speechless
Where your kindness stands?
The feelings of dejavu brings you happiness

That`s what we called a life
But still wondering to find --- what actually it is
We find us behind the night
Which`s why we escaping from our own bliss

Life never stops us doing anything we want
We`re the kings of our own
We can fly as high as we chant
Life has nothing to do with it ....
It you loose the Golden chance

Make some wishes and go for it
Have some faith in yourself ...
Try finding the new ways ---- working on it

Hope you like this version! I enjoyed reading your sexy poem even it`s a very thought-invoking write, Well written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

swarupa

9 Years Ago

thank u STEPHEN .. yes i like this one .. you made my poem more beautiful -:)
Stephen

9 Years Ago

~My pleasure~ Thanks, Sweety for liking that version. I`m glad to make some smiles on your lovely fa.. read more



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Nice sentiment. I like your spirit...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


swarupa

9 Years Ago

thank you dear ...
Beautiful poem .. you know what? A story write on which i`m working is yeah .. seemed a bit similar in theme with your this sexy poem. In the closing minutes, i`m going to post here my new story-write and hey .. i`m so happy to read this poem because it refreshes my mind.

Hey .. I loved this poem so, check out this version of your poem now :-

It may take you up
It may push you down
Sometimes... you feeling to give up
All of time, you live with a fake crown

Many times, it makes you much worthless
Most of the times, you find you speechless
Where your kindness stands?
The feelings of dejavu brings you happiness

That`s what we called a life
But still wondering to find --- what actually it is
We find us behind the night
Which`s why we escaping from our own bliss

Life never stops us doing anything we want
We`re the kings of our own
We can fly as high as we chant
Life has nothing to do with it ....
It you loose the Golden chance

Make some wishes and go for it
Have some faith in yourself ...
Try finding the new ways ---- working on it

Hope you like this version! I enjoyed reading your sexy poem even it`s a very thought-invoking write, Well written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

swarupa

9 Years Ago

thank u STEPHEN .. yes i like this one .. you made my poem more beautiful -:)
Stephen

9 Years Ago

~My pleasure~ Thanks, Sweety for liking that version. I`m glad to make some smiles on your lovely fa.. read more

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bhubneswar, hindu, India



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