fish in the darkness

Your mouth only speaks to control... You have no mind... Just ignorant principles that surround your everyday thinking. But you take those ignorant principles and try to force them into the minds of the youth. People are blind... They don’t even see it happening to themselves. I won’t be apart of this armageddon. Lets not hope for death... Life is music but a lot of it is s****y songs... Find the right band... I feel as though I have a good understanding on life, but I’m never going to figure it out. Where is my sun? I only see the one that shines down on all these lost minds. May I have my own? I know my soul but my light is falling through. I’m the fish in the sea that only swims on the bottom with the darkness and comes up to only see what the light has in stores for me... but the light has nothing.

Reviews

[MindIsAnOcean]

This is an interesting story. It read almost like a poem to me. I can also tell that this writing seems to come from some kind of experience you have had in life which makes it deeper. Nice.

[bob]

it is a poem, I accidentally set it as a story. Thank you!