how could you ?!

how could you ?!

A Poem by sweet candy

how could u see my tears then look the other way
i thought that u would care and ask me right away

but u only asked me once to make ur concious clear
u didn't bother 2 ask again or wipe away my tear

i was holding my self together so u thought i was ok
but 4 almost a week now i've been crying every day

and i tried to chear myself up in all the possible ways
but u have no clue how awfull i feel those days

and what made me worst than what i felt before
is that i thought the ones i love would care a little more

© 2011 sweet candy


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i love it(: especially the couplets. i can relat to this poem too

Posted 12 Years Ago


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