Spring Moon

Silently, we wait.
The landscape frozen.
Cold and barren
Till she comes again.

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

Reading this poem, I don't get any vibe of a "technical writer" trying to break the shackles. I see a landscape in four frozen lines. Succinct and very well done!

[Rachelle]

Thank you, sir!

[David Scott]

Waxing or waning she is still heavenly...
Good luck in your "waxing" phase. ;)
Lovely lunar vista.

[Rachelle]

Salamat po!

[icelandicblue]

I saw a snow moon the other night and it's beauty took my breath away but my bones are ready for the spring moon- she speaks of hope and rebirth. Your poem is lovely.

[Rachelle]

Just checked the weather report. It's going to snow again on Monday. :(

[Coyote Poetry]

A good poem for this season. Been very cold in Michigan. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rachelle]

Indiana is just as bitter sometimes up to -15. We hope for temperature to reach the 40s on Monday.

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

How about you readdress this one write a little more. Don't be so lazy. JK!
Four lines, sometimes, are enough to say it all. I would very much like to see a story written by you. What say you?

[Rachelle]

Admittedly lazy. Hard to write with a tiny touchscreen. No bluetooth keyboard yet and my laptop's dead. At any rate, technical writer is still who I am - everything short, sweet, and concise to be read by the masses. Check out "Polyandry" and "Missing" for stories done during the good old days when I had my laptop running. Thanks for reviewing!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

I will surely read them.

[Marie]

If I lived in a frozen land, I would wait for the spring moon too. But where I live, the weather today is like spring.

[Rachelle]

We're expecting two more winter storms, I believe.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

for me, (even though we in southern illinois are so tired of winter) i see the "she" as love.

could be two people waiting to get through a cold period in their relationship...could be
that the world itself is so frozen with apathy that we wait for movement again..rebirth.
so many possibilities when pieces are short and so visual as this...

different eyes see different patterns in the painting of words.

nicely done.

[Rachelle]

Thank you! I didn't think of that. The windows of our house are huge so you could see the sky clearly at any time of the day or night. I wrote it on a whim as I was looking out the balcony.

[Sami Khalil]

I felt the power of anticipation for the spring moon. Those days and nights will be lovely...Splendid...:).............

[Rachelle]

Hopefully, a pleasant spring and summer ahead!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)......................

[J Todd Underhill]

Spring is on the way, hold tight as the world is reborn!

[Rachelle]

A pleasant sojourn from the polar blasts!