More Invincible

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On the ramparts we all stand, brave and tall
Swords drawn fearlessly, never to fall.
Bows drawn taut, bound to defend
Wills steeled to meet our mortal end.
The enemy driven to take on his spoils
Our souls bound in these temporal coils.
Our spirits are precious in His eyes
In true perfection we must arise.
Embrace the destiny meant for you.
We all know what we have to do.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

He is always there. It's a great feeling to know such a thing. Great write and God bless. xo (:

[Rachelle]

Thank you!

[Lyn Anderson]

Hmmm. Food for thought. Do we all know?

[melissa]

Amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

[Rachelle]

Thank you!

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Vidya Bacchus]

We must never give up even when we think we can go on no longer.There is someone who will always be there for us in our time of need.We need only let him in.

[Rachelle]

Thank you, Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

There is one great source of power that we have in every battle that we face, and it depends on our faith how to gain such power. He's always beside us, we should only open our hearts...

Thanks for this very relevant piece this Sunday, sis. God bless!

[Rachelle]

salamat, sis!

[Woody]

very expressive write of medieval battle. the message is all too clear. never say die.
great write, Rachelle.

[Rachelle]

Thank you, Waheed!

[Utkarsh Singh]

i was reading ur poem and a battle was going in my mind ..........gud one ...love it

[Rachelle]

Wait! Let me get my light saber…..

[Utkarsh Singh]

but i dont have one ........its cheating ....:'(

[Rachelle]

You can shoot me with a Nerf….

[Rachelle]

Not me…. the enemy….

[Utkarsh Singh]

nerf ????? what's that?? and m not gona shoot u at all .....:P

[Rachelle]

Oh yeah! I forgot… India… they are foam dart toy guns… Popular in the Philippines and the US….

[Utkarsh Singh]

ooo.... i dont have it too . :P

[New Theory]

We know what we have to do.. stay alive

[Rachelle]

too literal, N.T.

[A. Amos]

Enjoyable read and you wrote neat...

[Rachelle]

Thank you, A. Amos!

[Hafiz Mohammad Yasir]

Really wonderfully written. congratulations. this is one of the few topics on which it is not easy to write a five star piece. well done

[Rachelle]

You are to gracious and generous, Hafiz! Thank you!

[Rachelle]

erratum: too gracious ….