sonnet x

they capitulate; body in your hands

to trap untie and release, unravel

you will be in control making demands

you will make them into something fragile.

they’ll come apart because you want them to

and that is all. they’ll cry if you want them 

to; shudder like you’ve run them through and through

immolate themselves in ways you’ve barely dreamt.

they will lie still overflowing because you 

asked because you wanted because you looked

at them just so; they saw you and they knew

please let me climb inside you, fingers crooked

if you were to give yourself to me,

you would see exactly how much i need

you.

Reviews

[Esteban Morfín]

Pleasingly weird. Not really my style but I like it, though. You are much more skilled than me.