Symphony

Symphony

A Poem by Misterr Remeat
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I got a ton of 'em

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It was the wonderful end
of a long dreamy day
orange light of the sun
on her eyes did it play
She turned her sweet face 
to look at the sea
she asked me a question 
I could never foresee
I know you might think 
this question crazy
but If I were a song 
how would you play me 
I leaned back on the grass
and gazed at the ocean
I gathered my thoughts
and came up with a notion
"I'd start with the surf
and the wind in the trees
these are the basics
your heartbeat to me
A little bass cello
And the cry of a tern
then sweet violins 
to make the heart yearn
Then a harp and a flute
played in unison
as wind flutters your hair
in my minds vision
The woodwinds come in
as your passions are stirred
louder they get
as they demand to be heard
Kettle drums signal 
the coming of thunder
will it pass by?
or rip us asunder
The cymbals and drums
The flashes of lightning
Drown out all else
as passions are heightening
then I final great horn
signals storms passing
leaving the audience
fearful and gasping
The the waves they grow smaller
With the woodwinds and cello
the harp comes back in
to make things more mellow
all is calm now
as we lie on the grass
the ocean below us
now looks like glass
That is how I would play you sweet lass
she sat and she smiled
she looked up at the skies
she looked over to me
with a laugh in her eyes
"such a way with words
such a lovely song
but don't you think I deserve
one more than three minutes long."

© 2017 Misterr Remeat


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absolutely love it. the change at the end really completes it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Misterr Remeat

7 Years Ago

Very glad you enjoyed it!

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Added on March 10, 2017
Last Updated on March 20, 2017
Tags: poem, poetry, romance, ocean, symphony, erotic

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Misterr Remeat
Misterr Remeat

Nanaimo, cold and rainy then warm and sunny, Canada



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I live in Nanaimo B.C. under the "Witless"Protection Program. Nanaimo is on the East coast of Vancouver Island which is on the West Coast of Canada. I work too much but still find time to write and ta.. more..

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