Cold

How I feel when I am in the Dark Places of my Mind when I feel at Peace with the Monster Inside me. When we are twisted and carnal and happy. © Hannah Ackerman 12/30/2011

Cold… Heartless… b***h… Monster… Truth… empty… dead… wicked… Happy.

Reviews

[Broken Soul]

The dark places of our mind are often our most creative.. You wrote this, I bet you could dig a little deeper and turn this into a nice poem, there are conflicting emotions here you could do for a poem seen from both sides: distress and perfectness. That's just a little bit of what I think, you don't have to take any mind to it.