Tears... ( Yumnakay style)

Tears... ( Yumnakay style)

A Poem by The earth (Titan maphaha)
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Cascading salty feelings ... off my eyes,


the rage of a sea within my tear glands ... calming simaltaneously,


Shuttered into shutters that fail to mend with forgiveness ---

nor blend and stick ~ with glue 


Altered ~ sea currents; conducting waves


...constructing an interference interfering calmness in my mind...


like a ticking bomb ~ I burst into tears,


like a crying child ~ I cry out my fears...

© 2017 The earth (Titan maphaha)


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i really like this mesh of opposites, chaos and calmness juxtaposed...
and that time bomb will eventually go off...can we withstand the explosion with calm demeanor.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


A peaceful write! Nicely done

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

3 Years Ago

Thank u so much
Love the first and last verses well done you !

Posted 3 Years Ago


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The earth (Titan maphaha)

3 Years Ago

thank you....
I like how you played with words here like "shuttered into shutters" and "constructing an interference interfering calmness"...
This is a heartfelt write indeed. Thank you too, that you think my style is worth writing in :)


Posted 3 Years Ago


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The earth (Titan maphaha)

3 Years Ago

An exquisite review... thanks "yum
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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The earth (Titan maphaha)
The earth (Titan maphaha)

Joburg, South Africa



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KENDRICK LAMAR IS MY WORLD AND J-COLE IS MY SECOND BEST, I'm doing my Masters degree in Mathematics in South Africa, And I'm tough in business studies, I also have a chess club which I created an.. more..

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