Tears... ( Yumnakay style)

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Cascading salty feelings ... off my eyes,

the rage of a sea within my tear glands ... calming simaltaneously,

Shuttered into shutters that fail to mend with forgiveness ---

nor blend and stick ~ with glue 

Altered ~ sea currents; conducting waves

...constructing an interference interfering calmness in my mind...

like a ticking bomb ~ I burst into tears,

like a crying child ~ I cry out my fears...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this mesh of opposites, chaos and calmness juxtaposed...
and that time bomb will eventually go off...can we withstand the explosion with calm demeanor.
j.

[Kesha]

A peaceful write! Nicely done

[The earth (Titan maphaha)]

Thank u so much

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love the first and last verses well done you !

[The earth (Titan maphaha)]

thank you....

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like how you played with words here like "shuttered into shutters" and "constructing an interference interfering calmness"...
This is a heartfelt write indeed. Thank you too, that you think my style is worth writing in :)

[The earth (Titan maphaha)]

An exquisite review... thanks "yum

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome :)