Not Here ...

 

 

Not here

      Not here ……

         May be someday … somewhere …

             In a distant shore …

                         We will meet

                                    To heal

   Our humiliated exposed sores …..

 

Not here

      Not here ……

        May be someday … somewhere …

      In a distant shore ….

             We will meet

                In the cherry bliss twilight

                        Where the blue ocean roars ….. 

 

Not here

      Not here ……

           May be someday … somewhere …

                                                  In a distant shore ………

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

Simply wonderful!!!! I loved this!!
May be someday � somewhere in a distant shore ���
I would only change one thing-instead I would put "on" a distant shore...
otherwise, GREAT job!!!

[Seriana]

"In the cherry bliss twilight
Where the blue ocean roars �.. "

Ocean, this was stunningly beautiful. Very impressive in its brevity and message. That line there is breathtaking. It paused me, and I smiled. I love it when poems do that. Nicely done! Thanks for sharing.

[Helena]

Oh I SO loved this one! Such wistful and beautiful thoughts...



"Not here

Not here ��

May be someday � somewhere �

In a distant shore ���"

Amen! ~ Helena ~ :)

[Samuel Dickens]

Oooh, that's nice. I really like this one, Ocean Orchid. Not a lot of words, but they are tasty and so well-placed. "In a distant shore"--Those words could mean so much.

[Dani California]

Yes, maybe someday. I like this.

Nice flow. Well done O!

[Wildfleour]

I like this a lot. I feel this way too.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Great imagrey, strong use of metaphors, a great poem all around. thanks for sharing.

kena