Regret over need for space

Regret over need for space

A Poem by tanmay7551
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In relationships sometimes you wish to have some space and soon you discover incomplete part of your life and want loved ones to join you to fulfill your wholeness and make you complete.

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Only few days and nights have past
It all started with a independant blast
Happy to share everything all alone
Freedom was expected while she was gone.

Days have not lasted the same anymore
Now each day is filled with a feeling of seperation.
Wish to talk to her every minute on phone
Nothing can change this feeling, neither medication nor meditation.

It happens everytime she is gone
Now I recall everything when alone.
And then finally comes cheer to my face
when I hear the news of her return to home.

Have been married since long
But while together sometimes wish for space.
But everytime I get hit back
And wish for her to understand me and come back.

© 2016 tanmay7551


Author's Note

tanmay7551
Plight of a man who needs some space from his wife but soon finds it difficult and incomplete without her.

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This can work for both sexes. We all need our own space but also each other. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

7 Years Ago

Yes Valentine, this can work for both sexes. Thanks for reading!

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Added on November 17, 2016
Last Updated on November 17, 2016
Tags: wife, life, return of wife, waiting for wife, need for space, space in relations

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tanmay7551
tanmay7551

bangalore, KR, India



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Sentimental, spendthrift and inconsistent. Will Power to overcome former 3 mentioned in progress! more..

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