Gift of words

Cheers to all those writers born out of broken heart! You unpacked the gift of God.

We are all born of God with gift of words,

But jammed are they in our heart when born.

Doors are locked and space so less,

They want to ooze but trapped within.

Tough is the task of God all knows,

We are hurt for good but no one knows.

Broken are those hearts when they lost love,

Freed is the gift of God but unknown.

Infinite pens are reborn to fulfill the wish,

They write those words but heart narrates.

Flow of words that never cease

Love never rests and never at peace.

Like chicks born out of broken eggs,

Words flow out of a writer with broken heart.

Then starts dance of nature and he sings,

Songs of trees and mountain speaks.

Heartbroken for once ever knows,

His gift within was received with heavy blows.

Author's Note

Cheers to all those writers born out of broken heart! You unpacked the gift of God.

Reviews

[Valentine]

A totally different concept on the things of the differences in life. Some are born with the gift of story telling and writing, just as many can sing while others cannot carry a tune. Perhaps it is not the broken heart that makes the writer but pain wants to be let out of the heart. Valentine

[tanmay7551]

Thanks Valentine for your thoughts on the subject.

[Rachel]

Nice one..I'll agree with the thought mentioned here..

[tanmay7551]

Thanks Rachel. I am glad that you liked it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and what Sylvia Plath said...readers want to know from someone who has been there and known the worst...

you express it well here...although first line feels a bit awkward, like it needs an article...



j.

[tanmay7551]

Thanks J.

I am new out here but everytime I read you I just want to be like you!
read moreThanks J.

I am new out here but everytime I read you I just want to be like you!

This minor change about first line... I did, let's see.

Thanks.

[Devanshi]

Nicely written and empphasized!! I loved the line–"Broken are those hearts when they lost love,"! The words placed in a beautiful manner. That line is simply beautiful. The poem has a good theme. There were a really few grammatical errors, but otherwise it was pretty good!!

[tanmay7551]

Thanks for your words, valuable!

Oh yes! Those errors, I may not even know :) But difficult for someone whose mother tongue is not English and while everyone cannot adopt it with same pace or quality, I never give up and that should help me contribute and progress better towards writing.

[Devanshi]

Sure! Never give up!! And I'm sorry if I made you feel bad...I know it's hard to catch with a language like English where there is no end to learning it!! (My mother tongue is not english either, so don't bother about the mother tongue, ok?)

[tanmay7551]

Haha! No, don't be sorry. My purpose here on writerscafe is to learn from all these gems of writers! I just love them all out here and each day is learning. I appreciate and welcome these kind of reviews as they are the only one that actually contributes towards my progress. Thanks so much.