Till their heaven lasts!

Youths of the world have been misguided through temptations of afterlife heaven and its terror that is destroying this world slowly!

Innocent face deceives your judgment

Like dark clouds covering the sky.

Born out of lust for women in heaven,

Born out of the glittering afterlife.

They march each day like a common man,

Only to end up in pieces when explode.

Millions of deaths and widows cry,

The heat of hatred and children sacrificed.

When will this terror end in the world?

God watches with a tear but silent.

Tallest building in the world has collapsed,

Valleys like heaven on earth have been raped.

Religion misguided, humanity corrupted,

Freedom of thoughts lost by injected hallucinations.

Cannot be stopped, cannot be caged,

Reconstruction of open mind only solves,

Or else in the world blood and terror flows,

Till their heaven lasts!

Author's Note

An attempt to highlight terrorism that is growing in the world!

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Well written! This is a great attempt!
We are familiar that terrorism is a hot topic these days..
It is often correlated with religion, which is lame!
These people are fierce, their aim is to destroy humanity..
I really like it!
My kind of writing ☺

[tanmay7551]

Thanks Tazeen for your review and encouraging words.

[Farha Nayamee]

Cannot be stopped cannot be caged..loved this line particularily...
cannot be controlled called be called off....often enough we had to and hVe to witness these in life...

[tanmay7551]

Thanks Farha, I am glad that you liked it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, the young ones are born of love, hopefully, but these days so many die because of the hate and terrorism in the world...

the innocents born into this world...i feel for them...and hate to imagine where we will be in 20 years.

[tanmay7551]

Yes J, it is very sad and the age at which they should be enjoying life carefree and gathering sound knowledge they are lured into something horrific.

[Diamond]

This is an amazing write. And quite an essential topic to touch on. I like the length of your poems. You do a great job.

Hoping that my input may help...

You may want to reduce the number of words to make the flow better. Like:

Tallest building of the world collapsed
Valleys like heaven on earth, raped

I had been reading your other work too, but was unable to review due to time constraint. Keep writing.

[tanmay7551]

Thank you so much. Your suggestions are very constructive and will help in my growth.

[Tom]

It's the godfathers and fanatical zealots who radicalise misguided youths into committing such heinous acts of self destruction and subsequent human massacre !

A poignantly penned powerful and thought provoking poem, well written and presented!

[tanmay7551]

Thank you Tom, Sir!
I though love sports as a common place where different countries meet. It's only that it is a misguided world controlled by few.

[Ted Kniffen]

Well written, T. There is truth here. Can things be changed? That can only happen if leaders speak out against these vile terrorists, but I don't see that happening. Good write

[tanmay7551]

True, can be solved if leaders take the lead.

Thanks for the review, Ted!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You speak the burning issue of today..wars..bloodshed... This is all we get to see these days..yet no one arises to do something about it... Great write!

[tanmay7551]

Thanks YumnaKay for your insight on the issue.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! The pleasure was mine ☺

[Valentine]

In some countrys I wonder just what will they have if they win the war. They are destroying the cities and leaving ruin and death every where. Thank you for speaking out in their defense. Valentine

[tanmay7551]

Thanks for your thoughts Valentine. Terrorism is something that this world is fighting isolated. It's like until I get hit..I won't mind.