seasons of nonexistant love;
A Poem by
aj tanze
love isin't anywhere ,
you can't find it,
it finds you,
the rarest of loves is true;
to want you, to need you,
just to breathe you in,
into the sweet summer air;
take me into the midnight under the silver,
yet lavender moon; bring me to winter,
under the crisp snowy trees,
i want you just to kiss you to cry over you,
over the love the boy,
that doesn't exist
© 2009 aj tanze
Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Reviews
Good work, I can feel the emotions flow, the want, the need for a love that just isn't there.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Very emotionfelt and empowering... your format is the only thing that could use a little work but if it comes from the heart I overlook that.. in this case.. you touched my heart and hopefully you found someone good enough to overcome these feelings!!! =)
Posted 15 Years Ago
Very emotionfelt and empowering... your format is the only thing that could use a little work but if it comes from the heart I overlook that.. in this case.. you touched my heart and hopefully you found someone good enough to overcome these feelings!!! =)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is a very heartfelt piece, and well expressed. Thank you for sharing this on here. Keep writing!
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is a very heartfelt piece, and well expressed. Thank you for sharing this on here. Keep writing!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on March 12, 2009
Last Updated on March 13, 2009
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aj tanze NJ
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hey. im aj tanze. i love to write so much!
it really relaxes me. i love to listen to music.
i love to read. i like to hula hoop and swing on
swing sets. i am fifteen years young. i hate school.
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