I Bid You Peace

An open door

In the hall of hell

An invitation

Buy or sell

Time to live

Or time to die

I bid you peace

Farewell and goodbye

Reviews

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Quite interesting
it made me think!!
Liked this short piece
Keep it up!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you for writing

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be nice to know one day of peace in our world. A lot to think about in this poem. Life is becoming less valuable today. People are treating death with less care or thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you the review and yes what you said is so true.

[marie]

this is truly a beauty to behold...:) great job:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[marie]

no problem i enjoyed it:)

[TPK Stories]

Short and simple and right to the point....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

Kind of grabs you by the throat this one....nicely pen'd.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lucien Maier]

Nice candence

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[C.C. Marx]

Its interesting how few lines can have a pretty strong impact, nice work

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

Like a little bird chirping a wise song...

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks

[beautiful dreamer]

what kelsey said! lol very good write as always. i like straightforward and short :)

[Lover Of Words]

Very good my dear short but yet gives a powerful message

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome sweet aunt of mine