Love Dream

Your essence is intoxicating

You leave me speechless at times

Especially when I see

My reflection in your eyes,

That leaves me wanting you

More and more

More than the sea loves the shore,

Waking in your arms

Is the best part of the day

Even if only for now is a dream

One day I will wake to reality, the same,

And all my love

Will be released to you

Because that's all

I will want to do,

But for now you remain my

Never ending love dream.

Reviews

[Jayden Ireton]

What a great piece. I love to read stories of passion. Great imagery with "My reflection in your eyes."

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[TPK Stories]

Beautiful. I guess you're right. We do write each others lives. Some crazy connection? It's like we both know what the other is going through. ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

I find it very strange too - we need to stay in contact and figure all this out!! ;)

[TPK Stories]

Lol!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Beautiful piece with honest message from the heart. love the sincerity of this piece I can feel it. thanks for sharing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. The description allowed the reader to feel the love and the desire in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

This is so beautiful i know i have read this already but i cant get enough of it... And your right the title I gave you doesn't fit it... I love this Nice job lovely aunt of mine!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome lovely lady :)

[Frieda P]

Very lovely dream, hopeful to become a reality one day. Wish I had this dream too, perhaps if I hang out here long enough! Nice one Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear friend Frieda :)