Loving The Shore

I admire you below the sun

I admire you below the moon

I admire the smile you place on my face

I admire all your fun,

Without you, I wouldn't know

The true meaning of love

I wouldn't know the true meaning of being blessed

For all that you have shown,

I'm blessed by your honest ways

I'm blessed by what you have given me

In these past beautiful days,

That makes me love you more and more

Like the waves love the shore.

Reviews

[Jack...]

Loved this one Tarry. This poem is happy and filled with words to make the reader smile. One thing I find funny is your use of the word shore. originating in the north east the word shore was the only word I used to describe where the ocean meets the sand, until I moved to Texas and it is now the coast. The word shore always brings pleasant memories back ot me. Very nicely done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Jack

[ANTO]

This piece made me think of loved ones whom i wanted to say all these things to, so it speaks to the soul IMO which means it came from YOUR soul Tarry. Hard to pen what the soul makes us feel at times so this is especially good in my book.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much ANTO

[Eddie Phillips]

Another poem by you Tarry that just carries the reader away.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Eddie

[Coyote Poetry]

The sea and love. Two of my favorite things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I like the metaphor of likening one's love to how the waves love the shore. :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Blue

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Nothing quite like the love of the Father,That's what I felt. Awesome Tarry:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Jonathan

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Welcome Tarry

[Antoñyo]

Another heartfelt piece from you that feels just like those waves loving the shore...

Thanks you

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Antonyo

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a happy and uplifting write! Very romantic. I liked the metaphor and the rhyming. Lydi**

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Lydi**

[Alex Vidmar]

Well done. Love this.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[TPK Stories]

Sweet loving words ... gives you hope to smile ... :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena