Don't Let This Fall

Don't Let This Fall

A Poem by Tarry Franck

The tears I shed are of shame
Because of what I have done
I'm the only one to blame,
Due to this I may have lost
The best I had
At all cost,
I want to start with a clean slate
But don't know if he's willing
To do the same,
I'm praying I didn't cross such a huge line
And he will take me back in a short time,
Love should over power all
And I know that's what we have
Please dear God don't let this love fall.

© 2014 Tarry Franck


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amazing once again Tarry, you have described your emotion perfectly. I know exactly how you feel and love will always find a away. its the mistakes we make that make us who we are and and as long as we learn by them we will always be aright. Love and life has a funny way of workinh out sometimes, but it always does x

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Chris



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Short but stings. One mistake can indeed ruin everything.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A powerful and honest plea for forgiveness. True love will find its way back. Nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sharon
amazing once again Tarry, you have described your emotion perfectly. I know exactly how you feel and love will always find a away. its the mistakes we make that make us who we are and and as long as we learn by them we will always be aright. Love and life has a funny way of workinh out sometimes, but it always does x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Chris
There is power in forgiveness...true love will win in the end...excellent write...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Starrleena
Sorry to hear about this. I do believe at times trust trumps love.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Michael
I love the honesty of this poem and the willingness to change.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Eddie
"And I know that's what we have
Please dear God don't let this love fall."
Sometime we need to slow down. I believe if we lead with love and kindness. Good things will come. A emotional ride in your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
A very sincere and heart-felt write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Very heart felt and real and beautiful of the unspoken kind. So special

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Kelsey
Awww Tarry this is very heart felt:))))))))))))))) if God so wants He will allow, but accept what He allows no matter it be good or bad ok. Trust me I know what I am saying. We cant set and say why God in all, Control the things u can do:) Be that person:) People say we cant change we can , we can change our emotions our thoughts, our actions way so many things. I have learn to really accept so much and it was worth it:).

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Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jonathan
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9 Years Ago

Your very welcome

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