Oh so sweet

My teeth

 tear 

into

 your

 flesh

so firm,

so supple,

 and ripe

 your succulent

 sweetness

pours out

 upon

 my lips

my tongue

 caresses

 you

as you again

 enter

 my mouth

a burst

an explosion

and then

 I swallow 

you 

sweet

 sweet 

strawberry.

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- wow... someone who is into cultivating strawberries and exporting them... would love to hire you as their copy writer... -- you would take advertising to a whole new level... :p

-- brilliant stuff, monsieur terry...

[Riley]

so seductive makes me want to go and raid a store of their produce ............ especially those strawberries ^-^

[terry smith]

stolen food tastes the best:)

[roarke]

I prefer nectarines myself. But to each his own juicy obsessions....

[Kelly Scheppers]

My, my, what a delectable surprise...I love it...and want more!! ; )

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Oh you're such tease...
:)

[Jen Walters]

Interesting take on eating fruit. Never wrote a poem about eating fruit before; at first I was going to recommend you put an 18 or older rating on this but then I read the rest of it and thought against it after reading it all. Great alliteration and imagery; thanks for sharing this piece and have a great day.

[terry smith]

Yes I agree I almost did put an 18 plus on it... I hope no one takes it wrong.

[Jen Walters]

maybe you should put a disclaimer on it saying that its about fruit not about anything else at least. That way you can guarantee no one takes it wrong. I loved it though; thanks for sharing this piece; and feel free to browse my library if you would like.