Wish you were here

this is to all the lost souls

the ones no longer with us

I miss seeing your smile

the lilt in your voice

the comfort of your presence...

YOU.

In my dreams

 I  visit you

and you are there waiting for me,

 I see you as you were ,

and we share a time...

together

till I wake...

and start missing you all over again.

Author's Note

A friend of mine is missing...and it made me think of all those I have lost.

Reviews

[Riley]

reminds me of the song called wish you were here by incubus..... that song gives me so many feels just like this piece does. It's really hard loosing someone, even if its just to them being out of your life. It is harder at least to me when they are gone for good because then you know you really cannot change things.... *sigh*

[~]

This is sad ... I hope you will receive good news soon

[terry smith]

thanks me too.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

oh man. this is tough. in my thoughts.

[terry smith]

thank you JCC !!

[B]

Your writes have so much honesty to them
Speaking your soul openly

I can relate to your style

Its hard to lose someone

[terry smith]

I was actually in tears writing this one...thank you! :)

[B]

I can feel your emotions
That is amazing
Waw ...... You must be a very unique person

[Idk]

I really love this, it's powerful, and it really is tragic to lose a loved one, so anyone and everyone who has, stay strong. :)

[terry smith]

Thank you for the kind words!

[....................]

a terrible thing to experience and so poignantly written...another 'hits-the-heart' penning, my friend

[terry smith]

Thank you kind sir! this was difficult to write!

[....................]

i can imagine...it brought a lump to my throat in the wake of personal memories...you are welcome

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

The choice of vocabulary in this is breathtaking. Its simple but so powerful. Something less is more and in the case of this you are able to covey so much in such a small space. Bravo!

[terry smith]

Thank you! I often go for less and let the reader interpret the meaning .