Love can be many things

just lay with me 

my morning dove

and gaze upon the stars above

let the sun come up

with it's rainbowed hue

and cover us with it's morning dew

let your hair

rain down upon me

from above

as we speak

of true love

for on your lips

a kiss we meet

and in your eyes

a light so sweet

let me breath you in

for a while

the afterglow

of your smile

raises my spirits

to the stars above

forever with you

my one true love.

Reviews

[Indra Neil]

beautiful imagery and the flow is wonderful! :)

[terry smith]

Thank you Indra!!

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! :)

[Zugzwang]

This is a beautiful expression of love. I really liked the descriptions of intimacy and thought this added another dimension to the poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a powerful love poem...like the formatting...the short lines, lots of impact. One suggestion...the two "it's" should be "its"...
yes, love can surely raise one's spirit.

[B]

Its nice to finally call someone who has been waiting for you this long

[Gee]

A beautifully written gift if given to a loved one.Nice one Tel me ol' China....that's me being a plastic cockney.

[alifeacoustic]

Love can indeed be many things Terry. You have captured a beautiful essence of it here in your words. The ending is perfect "forever with you my one true love".

[terry smith]

Thank you!! someone asked me to write something so I did:)