French kissing a .45 [ trying to coax the lead out ]

sometimes 
i kiss the 
cold steel 
trying to 
translate 
russian into 
comfort 
for my 
soul 
while 
spinning 
the 
wheel 
counting 
on red 
but 
betting 
on blank 

I 
only 
give it 
one shot 
a day 
& today 
wasn't 
it 
so i 
empty 
my glass 
of 
whiskey 
& try 
to get 
some 
sleep

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

the title grabbed me terry, just brilliant writings, i had these images lol down the barrel.and expected a senryu at first but you never disappointed.

[terry smith]

thanks i havebeen writing so much...my floor is littered with scraps of it

[andrew mitchell]

i'm the opposite not a skerrick just some terrible nonsense which don't even get a comment ,they are that bad lol but i do remember those writing surges once!

[terry smith]

i have written miles of trash so don't feel bad if you don't like something when you look back at it...i keep them all as a kind of journey to show how far i have come