Just a warm body

 

When you invited me over  

i thought that you wanted  

to see me  

but when i saw  

the sadness in your eyes  

while we were making love  

i realized you  

just didn't want to be alone   

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

And, sometimes we might wonder who they truly miss... the “sadness” in the eyes suggests it’s not us. A well crafted piece that leaves us empty.

[terry smith]

Thanks for the review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is really making love in more ways than one...fulfilling a need over and above the want...
sometimes this kind of making love is the most intense.
Have been there and done that...and understand this more than i want to.
j.

[terry smith]

I think many of us have been on one side or the other of this story...I really appreciate all of your comments, Terry