chocies

chocies

A Poem by Tatiana
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by now you should no i can't spell worth crap, so if theres any spelling mistakes (with i know there'll be a lot) sigh let me know xxoxo tati

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Oh pitiful shadow lost in the darkness,

Sin making you more thirsty.

 

Dammed soul cries for more pain,

Evil ones words whispers too ones ears,

Knowing no bounders.

 

Savoring ones pleads, misery

Goodness blooms in your heart.

 

Evils harsh snicker of

Weakness being back pain.

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Waling in torment, perhaps

 

It’s time to die.

 

© 2010 Tatiana


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Oh girl, yes lots of spelling errors, but i still caught tour drift, and i'm quite certain you could correct them yourself if you wished

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