Hell part 2 end

remember i can't spell xoxo tati

Return darkness to light, return light to darkness.

 

forgeting me in your mind,

bleeding, screaming,lips a blue.

 

tied to the on-going thrid of death,

 

In hell ash falls like snow,

 

Cold, lonleness, shadows,pain,memories, tourment.

 

When an angel falls, wings riped in shards pf ruby blood,

 

Pain and regret in their eyes, oh how i long for the deep dreaming

of sleep in this field of brocken souls, i lay awake in my self.

 

How i try hard not to think of you, i have to be with you to live, to breath

 

screaming as the whip of fate hits my back.

 

oh why god? Hells taking over me.

 

 

Reviews

[Markymark]

Very interesting write, talent shining through. I'm not sure about the subject matter, but I know there's a duality of meanings here. Is this biographical? I enjoyed reading this, even though it was dark and brooding. I really did.

Mark

[vido.]

very beautiful and flowery! you have an interesting use of juxtaposition. i love the line, "When an angel falls, wings riped in shards of ruby blood," so intense. so captivating, great job!