The old book store.

The old book store.

A Poem by Tatiana Havens

I went to an old book store
to pick out a novel. 
One with bent pages & highlighted sentences
that give you further details about the ones who left it on the shelf.
A worn down spine;
which was many people's reason to not even think to take a second glimpse at it. 

This book reminded me of you.
Existing, but not being taken away by life's adventures.
All because you're too caught up in your sadness.
Maybe even too caught up to notice
how much you really mean to me.

© 2013 Tatiana Havens


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Tatiana Havens
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This is a great little poem. I like the way that it makes you start to think of one thing, and then you switch it up on us, and it shows something totally different. The ending was touching. I'd be curious to know what the inspiration behind this piece is. My only critique is that at the end of the first stanza you use 'many' twice. I can understand that it adds effect, but (in my personal opinion) it kind of hinders the flow of the poem. Once again that is just my opinion. I really liked this a lot though. Thank you for sharing it with us all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tatiana Havens

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I realize now that I should take out the second maybe!


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This is a great little poem. I like the way that it makes you start to think of one thing, and then you switch it up on us, and it shows something totally different. The ending was touching. I'd be curious to know what the inspiration behind this piece is. My only critique is that at the end of the first stanza you use 'many' twice. I can understand that it adds effect, but (in my personal opinion) it kind of hinders the flow of the poem. Once again that is just my opinion. I really liked this a lot though. Thank you for sharing it with us all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tatiana Havens

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I realize now that I should take out the second maybe!

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Added on March 9, 2013
Last Updated on March 10, 2013
Tags: book, adventure, love, girl, boy, vintage, indie

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Tatiana Havens
Tatiana Havens

Ontario, Canada



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I'm 14 years old from little old Canada and this past year writing has become a joyous part of my life. My favourite words are resound and sonder. Have a beautiful day! more..

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