God Hell

God Hell

A Poem by Sunflower

is there a god
one who can control me?
is there a hell
one to hold me?
am i full of pureness
one that saints are made of?
or just full of evil
the ones my demons dream of?

© 2014 Sunflower


Author's Note

Sunflower
it's not finished but this is the current song i'm working on. this would be the first verse or the chorus. i'm not sure yet to be honest. it's a work in progress obviously. thoughts needed and suggests.

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I love how raw and real this piece is, it really reflects the common thought process of today's youth. Its a tough time to grow up, and a lot of kids end up sitting down and asking themselves these types of questions: does God exist? If He does, does he hate me? Am I going to hell? Am I good? Am I bad? Better yet...who am I? It keeps it real with the reader and allows room for self reflection. Very well penned!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I love how raw and real this piece is, it really reflects the common thought process of today's youth. Its a tough time to grow up, and a lot of kids end up sitting down and asking themselves these types of questions: does God exist? If He does, does he hate me? Am I going to hell? Am I good? Am I bad? Better yet...who am I? It keeps it real with the reader and allows room for self reflection. Very well penned!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sunflower
Sunflower

Garrett, IN



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Currently at the awkward age of 20, and still searching to find where it is that I feel like I belong. My life is a constant clock of lateness. I have a handsome little boy named Oliver; he is the rea.. more..

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