the eyes

the eyes

A Poem by taylorrose
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this poem is about my eyes seeing what many turn there eyes away from which is domestic violence

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the eyes are awaking

for a moment i fall to the ground

waiting for an end

but look up for a second to see god

standing there he smiles and gives me his hand

he speaks so calm "take my hand its okay im here now"

so i take his hand

i wave goodbye to the world below my feet

i follow him into the distance

beyond the darkest skies

the eyes are awaking

© 2011 taylorrose


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A very nice and hopeful poem. We need to have belief and hope to survive. I like the positive ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice write, quite the enjoyable read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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taylorrose

marshalltown, IA



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