its not just a rose

its not just a rose

A Poem by taylorrose

a rose

they say

its supid

just a flower

but it means more

a rose

something

that loves

that shows love

a flower yes

a item no

something

more than the little shades

its a plant

a rose

that loves more

than anything

something that holds together

that shows life

it even dies when old

something we all are afriad to do

its a rose

something i hold dear

its who i am

its what i want to be

something thats not afriad

to just let go

its more than just a rose

it holds life

beneath its petals

for all eternity to see

its more than just a rose

© 2011 taylorrose


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A rose had many meaning. Can mean love or can open the door to friendship or forgiveness. I like your description. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reviewing again...I know this sounds rude but that sounds exactly what my story was. My rose represented "Love,Courage,life" And I made my story before you 'made' this. I'm starting to think...

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it!!
(Small suggestion; I caught some spelling mistake that hindered the readers from understanding your poem as well as it could be understood. If those few mistakes are fixed, the poem would be truly amazing). :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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taylorrose
taylorrose

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