the story of how i disapeared

you see them

i did to

they called to me from far away

people i never met

saying they needed me

people thought i was crazy

my parents thought i was playing

they didnt realize

what i was saying was true

these things that were dark called to me

they pulled me in and i was dumb

i listened as they pulled at me

they told me to come

i was taken in by there words

that i followed to a little cliff

where they asked me to jump

full of there mind tricks

i took a leap of faith

only to realize my own death

i dispeared under there spell

i became

what they were

something that didnt excist

i fell down

Reviews

[sivan]

very eerie poem... but its a different way of depicting temptation... nice one

[~Dragon X]

Hmmm, kind of spooky :) I really like it. The pictures are nice and add to the intensity. Keep going! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem. Took me on a wild journey. Artwork gave life to the words. I like the ending a lot. Some spells can lead us to bad places. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote