its happening agian

it always happen

i thought at first

it was just a mistake

im starting to see

that its more than that

i met him

fell in love with him

treated him nice

then he met her

my sister

he fell for her

didnt care how i felt

i was deeply sadden

then i met a new one years later

i became his friend

i fell pretty hard

then he met her

my sister

he fell in love with her

i was more than sad this time

it was all happening agian

then the next guy who i thought was different

fell for my sister to

what can i do

i have nothing left for me

im tired of games

someone please help me

im not sure what to do

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Keep them away from your sister. Or teach your sister good manners. True love is blinded to all things except the person they love. If someone care for you. You are the sun and the moon and they shouldn't be looking for someone else. Have patience. Those two were not true. When real love comes. You will know. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daniel88Batson]

Add some punctuation and place it in a straight line... then you have a very good monologue.
Poetry is based on images. This is based on a story. try it in a monologue and see what you think. I think you'll like it more. =D

[sivan]

falling for the wrong guys... girls fall for the wrong guys cos the wrong ones know the right things to say

[~Dragon X]

Just moving in a circle, huh? Very nice. Telling a story in a poem :D

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Ohmygosh, this is sooo good! :) I love this