what if

what if

A Poem by taylorswift22
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a poem by cadeja reyes

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I asked you if I was pretty and you said  no. I asked you if I was fat and you said  yes of course. I asked u if wanted to be with me forever and you said NO. I asked you if you would cry if I walked away and you said  no. I heard to much and need to leave and, as I walked away... u grabbed  my arm and told me to stay and u said... Ur not pretty your beautiful and the only thing  fat   or big is your heart I don't want to be with out you forever I need to be with you forever.

And baby, I wouldn't Cry if you walked away I would Die.

© 2010 taylorswift22


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The happy ending was quick, but not exactly sappy. I commend you for that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on November 7, 2010
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taylorswift22
taylorswift22

Childress tx, TX



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hi my name is cadeja and I am single and my birhtday is may15,1997, and I have the most amazing friend ever her name just so happens to be bailey kaye martinez she is a great friend she always got my.. more..

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