Stuck With You

Getting lost...
in those gazing eyes...
fingers intertwining into mine...
I am slowly getting stuck...

Losing breaths...
from uncontrollable laughs...
I am going numb...
from the smile on my face...
the kind you can’t refuse...

I am being pulled in...
there is no escaping this vortex...
this fate filled vortex...

Your lips locking into mine...
so soft...
just like your hands...
gliding around me...
every touch brings me goosebumps...
so intensely...
you drew me in...

The way I feel...
as you dance with me...
as you take me for a spin...

Go ahead and let me in...
because I like being stuck with you...

Living in a movie...
with every unrealistic experience...
ones that are only thought up...
there is nowhere I would rather be...
than being stuck with you.

Reviews

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Caught hook line and sinker! I love reading writes like this! I been at this place but when its like this and the eyes meet and your caught in that vortex as you said the spin spill of a moment or love! Which ever the feeling is wow! Powerful stuff!!!!

[Alessander]

This struck me almost like a romantic song.

just like your hands...
gliding around me...
every touch brings me goosebumps..

You've done a great job of catching the exhilaration of new love, the sensations, turmoil, rhythm, the falling into the 'vortex' in ecstasy.

This is quite romantic and atypical from the usual bitter broken stuff I usu write lol

Good stuff. This made me feel better.

[Chris Shaw]

Being reeled in to love. Sounds like hook, line and sinker:) You describe that intoxicating feeling well.

Check tense in 4th stanza, last line. Should be draw rather than drew?

Chris

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

Thank you, I appreciate that. As for the drew, I specifically put drew as a past tense ❤️