I am

I am

A Poem by Tomas Thornhill
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I am describing the many characteristics of myself.

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I am accommodating and affectionate
I wonder if there is a higher being
I hear the silence of lies
I see my soul being bared into my own poetry
I want people to realize their true self
I pretend words don't hurt me
I feel saddened by the greedy wealthy
I touch other feelings carefully
I cry for the opressed
I understand world peace will never exist
I say the things that come to my mind
I dream big dream
I try to put my friends before me
I hope people will care for their children
I am accommodating and affectionate

© 2012 Tomas Thornhill


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oh, i remember having to do these poems in school. but you wrote it better than i ever did. great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very well written. I like the coming full circle effect "I am accommodating and affectionate."

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tomas Thornhill
Tomas Thornhill

Troy, MI



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I am a poetry writing young boy, who wants to seek the many passions of poetry. I wrote my first poem and from there i would like to write more because i believe i have more expectations of writing po.. more..

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