The Last

I saw the tear in your eye,
Rolling down your face
as the sobs continue.
Fear struck
You look back at me
For a second I recognised you
But it was only for a second...
You close your eyes
Then breathe the last breath
you have.
Leaving behind sorrow
My tear drops on your shirt

Author's Note

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Reviews

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awwwwwww...; ;

[joshua deathdealer]

Sad yet necessary..Well done..xx

[TheRavenQueer]

So sad, so powerful. :( Couple of typos that I noticed: "Rolling" and "recognised". But other than that, this is fantastic. Great job! :)