knives and pens

knives and pens

A Poem by raymond
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written by mallory and hannah

"
knives are silver
pens are black
i grow a weakness
from what i slack

i miss life
i miss me
i miss
what i used to be

u can do no wrong
my money is yours
because i miss your
it beats chores

now its time to end
i got places to be
and money to spend

© 2011 raymond


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that's awesome ray

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the rhyme and rhythm in this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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