Dark Black Hole

Dark Black Hole

A Poem by felweed
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Life

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Deep Dark Black Hole

 I opened my eyes and I saw the sun,

not realing what I had just done

I gave up my heart, but lost my soul

letting it slip in that deep dark black hole

Looking for joy which I'd never known

having lived my whole life alone

Looking for love for someone who cared

entwining our lives with so much to share.

I found the person, the love of my life

and finally asked her to please be my wife.

But the laughter I heard was to much to take

feeling my heart begining to break

Feeling the knife cut down to the bone

wishing and crying to be all alone

So looking inside for my lonely lost soul

searching endlessly in the deep dark black hole.

© 2009 felweed


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thats really sad. =( now im kinda depressed but it was really well written =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sad ]: I dont want you to ever feel like that again. Ever. [: Thats why Im here.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damn, sucked all the joy right out of me...and it's Saturday. I'm depressed :-(

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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felweed
felweed

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The following words, are they my life or my sick imagination that is full of strife But what you think or want to beleive remember my words cuz they all came from me. more..

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