I hate you

I hate you

A Poem by that weird guy


  I hate it

  when I
 
  pretend it doesn't
  matter


I hate it when you
act like nothing
is wrong.

I hate it when
you say you
love me just
not enough
to care about me.

I hate you.

I hate the lies.

I hate their words
and their looks.

I want to drown myself
in my own pain
and then smile and
laugh and say
im okay.

© 2011 that weird guy


Author's Note

that weird guy
im writing a lot of random shit

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Hm, and that is a good view you given.
The last stanza, that just i loved.
:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometime better to have silence then to hear words that are untrue. I like the honest feel and desire in the poem. I like the ending. Sometime best to walk away and not waste time and energy on useless people. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your "random s**t" is really good, man. I really like this. Alot.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This isn't random s**t!
I promise you, it's not.
It's a jumble of thoughts, but that's portrayed perfectly by your mismatched format, (which is AWESOME by the way)
Your grammar leaves a little to be desired, but other than that, I honestly enjoyed reading this! good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


random is fun and i know how it is to put on a fake smile

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it!!! Your very creative when you write poetry :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it:D

Posted 12 Years Ago


great back and forth motion, wonderful style. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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hello. my name is danny. im a weird person. so i write weird poems. and i am bipolar. and that is all you need to know about me. if you really want to ask something, then send me a message. just keep .. more..

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