aah!!!

ahh! THis calls for her need
I dint know why I'm behaving mad!!!
are all the things right?
or something is going wrong ????
MY all friends are chilling, having fun..
enjoying the moment !!!!
I don't why being w'd them I'm not doing such
what i'm searching for
0r why i am sad!!!!
I guess i could know
was I really missing her
or feeling alonE

Reviews

[Surya]

It is good...I don't point any errors as you will improve by days....You conveyed it in a good voice...I liked it..:)

[Prashant Bajpai]

thanks surya my friend but i will be happy if you point the mistake as well

[Surya]

It's my plsr....
ok then, let me say where you have to improve but I don't point out your mistake as I feel it as worst thing I have ever done....
.Just take care of characters, each one need not to be Capital...And I when placed alone without any supportive words or characters it should be capital....There are some missing words in between words...

[Priyanshi]

Whoa, It feels as if you penned my emotions..usually I do feel like that too...very well written, friend...
Keep on writing.

[Prashant Bajpai]

priyanshi i am very happy with this review and i will share more like this .... becoz sometimes i feel i am good at writing romance.. thanks for giving your time to review

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure, friend.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

You need to fix your English spelling up a bit
Apart from that I understand the meaning
Needs some editing
Keep writing

[Prashant Bajpai]

surely sir i am working on the mistake and i know with your help i will be a good writer