Who am i?

Who am I?
Do you know?

Am I just another passing face?
Do you ever look me in the eyes?

Am I a no-body?
Do you hate me?

Am I looked down apon?
Do you think less of me?

Am I going to last?
Do you think you would try to help?

Am I a monster?
Do you think i should be locked away?

Who am I?
Do you know?

Author's Note

my first poem on here, any tips?

Reviews

[Caradactyl]

Wow, you're sure that's your first poem? :) That was brilliant, it spoke to me because I've felt this way before. The only thing that I would say is capitalize your I's, that's the only thing that bothered me. Other than that, I enjoyed this a lot!

[watch_the_world]

No I do not know who u r. But I think that u should ask a question then kind of make a statement about the question under it xD. That's my tip bcuz it will add length and also give insight as to how u feel about yourself xD. Good poem though I like it xD