10 Thousand Years

10 Thousand Years

A Poem by Ray
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"If I can put a limit to this love, it'd be 10 thousand years" - Monkey King, Chinese Odyssey

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You give me your hand
I’ll give you mine
Words cannot describe you
You are undefined
Forever wondering
Everlasting
I can always trust in you
If only love could last forever
If only this love was true
Although we may part one day
That's one of my biggest fears
If ever we may part
It’d be in ten thousand years

© 2010 Ray


Author's Note

Ray
Based on the quote i found in the movie xD

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heartfelt and creative poetic spin off the quotation~well done~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 10, 2010
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