A Tragedy in Cliches

A Tragedy in Cliches

A Poem by thdbldee



Love at first sight
head over heels
Romeos and Juliets on hamster wheels

Look at the lovebirds
honeymoon stage
skipping the chapters to read the last page

Happy ever after
she found Mr. Right
fools gold does glitter deceptively bright

A gallant effort
gave it your best
no one forgets their first wedding dress.

© 2013 thdbldee


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Tim
Great rhymes I'm not to sure what Romeos and Juliets on hamster wheels means but it sounds good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thdbldee

10 Years Ago

I intended to paint a picture of lovers running in place, going no where.

Its common t.. read more
Tim

10 Years Ago

It does, I should have known that. You're welcome.

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