Secrets

I have seen the devil
to me will he speak
on my lips he whispers
his secrets I will keep
as I lay in darkness
up to me he creeps
to me he will sin
from my neck he'll drink

Reviews

[Denise]

Good short poem...At first start of the poem I immediately thought this was about a devil inside ourselves, like our alter ego, but then it ended with the line from my neck he will drink, soo I was wrong...vampire poem! :)

[freelancejouster]

the darkness and ambiance of this poem is well thought out, captivating, and interesting. is there a reason for the break in rhyme scheme?

[Madison A. Wright]

The battle between good and evil. The devil has your soul in this one

..well written