It knows what it has to do Although it is still shinning The sun is dimmed inside I can still feel it's warmth But it's so much less without you
Tonight the stars are shinning brightly dimmed They just don't know what else to do Although they still make me wonder I just don't care to reach on out And yes they still hold mystery But it's so much less without you
The world keeps on turning It knows what it is expected to do Life just keeps running along Guess there is no point in standing still Miracles are still happening before my eyes But it's so much less without you
So now I am alone again Just like I always seem to be I have lived without you before It is gonna take time to recover But I guess I can live without you again It is just all so much less without you
I am just so much less without you I don't think I have ever been this lost All the signs that used to guide me They now read 'no vacancies' I can't find reason or meaning anywhere
Everything is just so much less without you
But I will not let you break me I will find the strength to stand again Just like I have always done before There may not be much left to believe in now But I will hang on just a little while longer I just wanted you to know that I am so much less without you
surprised others havent commented on this..its quite a thoughtful piece of writing written from the heart to the heart.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you P.J. I attempted to get the feeling of acceptance and not blame for the love denaturing. I.. read moreThank you P.J. I attempted to get the feeling of acceptance and not blame for the love denaturing. If you truly love someone you can not hate them or blame them for leaving you, just let them know that you will be less without them. I appreciate your review.
Congratulations on your win in the Goodbye Love Poems contest!! Your words make my heart weep as you have said farewell in such an eloquent way! Being so much less is really being so much more!!
Beautiful, reminiscing, bittersweet, dark, light, intricate, sorrowful, lovely....
Please, pass some glue, my mind has been blown once again...
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Pass some glue,PMSL, best comment ever, Dramatic profile picture change the other day, who is the re.. read morePass some glue,PMSL, best comment ever, Dramatic profile picture change the other day, who is the real you, who is the real me, who is the real us, are we real.........pass the glue mate!
12 Years Ago
Hahaha mahalo... my cousin changed my picture... I like to stay anonymous in name and photo so I cha.. read moreHahaha mahalo... my cousin changed my picture... I like to stay anonymous in name and photo so I changed it back, but it does bring that up!! We only really know each other by our words...
12 Years Ago
Well I have little confidence in my words so that's why I use the alias of 'The Human Voice'. Your I.. read moreWell I have little confidence in my words so that's why I use the alias of 'The Human Voice'. Your ID is safe I did not get a good look, words say more than appearance does, literally!
You should have a lot of confidence!! Your works are absolutely amazing and each one I read gets bet.. read moreYou should have a lot of confidence!! Your works are absolutely amazing and each one I read gets better and better. Lol and I like anonymity, I'm not sure why... hence my alias and fake pic lol.
And your right, words run deeper than physical appearance, for words come from the artists heart and soul I believe.
12 Years Ago
That is very kind of you to say, There are some amazing writers on here. I look at Andrea Gibson, Bu.. read moreThat is very kind of you to say, There are some amazing writers on here. I look at Andrea Gibson, Buddy Wakefield and especially Daniel Beaty and just wish I had their gift. You tube them if you have not heard of them. Daniel Beaty's Knock Knock is mind blowing!
12 Years Ago
Sounds intriguing. I will definitely look them up!!
http://www.youtube.com/user/HumanVoiceThe
(You Tube Channel for Performance Poetry)
Without the darkness that surrounds them the stars could not shine. I give praise and thanks to the darkness for a.. more..