i am all i want

i dont what im talking bout jus writing words. wanted to write something even if it aint great.

one day

ill be so brave

as 2 say what i really feel

no longer will ur expectations hold me

make me

mold me

or define me

ill be free to b an a*****e

like every1 else

ill lose faith

in u&me every being anything ever again

that way i wont care if u dont love me

want me

need me

or desire me

cuz ill be free of u

and become all of me

Reviews

[Rodney Russ]

Not a bad piece. It deals with the need to be free of the ghost of the past. We've all been there wishing never to feel again so we can relate. I'd re-write the pice and delve deeper, maybe be a little more confessional. Good effort though.

[theladyjai]

i dont what the hell i was thinking wit this