you

you

A Poem by theladyjai

meaning something to you

use to mean something to me

i valued you above my own feelings

your acceptance and rejection

could determine my mood

i think back now like,

"how could care that much about you"

© 2008 theladyjai


Author's Note

theladyjai
felt like writing something. wasnt sure what.

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Shorter works that hold a message a full of power. This one sure is. I like the flow and your use of all lower case letters, make it seem more like a thought caught on paper.

Should the last line read: ""how could i care that much about you" ?

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I am a student currently at OSU. I have been writing since I was little but I have yet to complete a full story. I have alot of good ideas that sometimes over take me ( I have occasional ADD) and I wa.. more..

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