Love me tirelessly

Love me tirelessly

A Poem by thelauraslate

My love for you is never at rest,

every day it transcends itself,

hoping only to improve perfection.

Enveloping every thought, smile and breath

my heart is unchangeably yours.

Without hesitation, I relinquish myself to you.

Wary of being mistreated, I kept my distance.

Love, you are honest and careful and true.

Your tender touch knows no  harm, my Comforter.

Your hair, your scent, your skin, your eyes

feed me strength and hope.

I am enchanted by your sweetness and charm.

When you speak my name my heart swells,

as if only your lips were meant to address me.

Your love is all-encompassing and has no rivals.

Nouns, letters, verbs, they are futile.

My eyes convey unfeigned feelings for you. Love.

They say "Keep me, I am yours. Love me tirelessly."

© 2012 thelauraslate


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thelauraslate
This is my first try at writing something like this, tell me what you think.

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Emotive and romantic.
Well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aw, this is amazing. I really like this poem and hope that you have more!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Jon
Very intense-good use if metaphors. I especially liked the line, "When you speak my name my heart swells". It expresses a feeling we've all experienced but were not sure how to describe. Nice job!



Posted 11 Years Ago


amazing words ~ enjoyed

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an amzing poem. Keep it up!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on June 22, 2012
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Tags: love, lesbian, love letter, love peom